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She used to be a rose,
Her petals ruby red.
She used to be an angel,
With a halo 'round her head.

This girl was once a dove,
Her wings spread open wide.
A strong, but beautiful mare,
On whom anyone could ride.

Once a gentle spirit,
She could heal the deepest scars.
She was once the Moon,
Who could outshine the stars.

Now her petals are gone,
And she's overcome with thorns.
Her angel wings have been replaced,
With a set of demon horns.

Once a dove but now a raven,
She's been robbed of all that's pure.
And her once-strong horse's back,
Is weak and insecure.

Her former healing nature,
Replaced with her own cries.
Her misty moonlight glow is gone,
Just an orb in the night sky.

This transformation was not by chance,
There's a cause for everything.
I know this poor girl much too well,
For this shattered soul is me.
©2008-2010 ~xX-Trixie-veela-Xx
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Author's Comments

Alright, I was bored out of my mind on Friday night, and I had the urge to write a poem. So I did. I'm open to criticism and suggestions, just don't be too mean.

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:iconpassion4writting:
OMG! that was awesome tori oreo.. I love it..it was depressing and sad but it was deep and ur an awesome poem writer. But do u really feel like that? ILY

Jessica<3LYLAS

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thanks guys
:iconkibakid4298:
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~Sometimes you have to play the villian to be a hero~

~Sometimes the one thing you wish for most, is the thing you can never have~
:iconwishtobeinadream:
it was dark, but truly amazing. I love love LOVE it.

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~Bombing For Peace Is Like Fucking For Virginity~

~Mirror Mirror On The Wall, Watch Me Break And Watch Me Fall~

~Life Can't Always Be In Black And White; Sometimes You Need A Splash Of Color~
:iconrandombabe:
OMGITSSOAWESOMEOMG >w< :dance: For once I don't have any critism...Feel proud now xDD AND HONORED *falls over* WOO : D The rhyming and rhythm was so coooooooooool *o* It matched!!! OMG so cool =3

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'Let me guess, you picked out yet another colorful box with a crank that I'm expected to turn and turn until OOP! big shock, a jack pops out and you laugh and the kids laugh and the dog laughs and I die a little inside.' ~ Stewie.
:iconxx-trixie-veela-xx:
Thank you so much! If you don't have criticism, it must be good!

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The heart is the only broken organ that works...
:iconxx-trixie-veela-xx:
Thanks, Kendal!

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The heart is the only broken organ that works...
:iconxx-trixie-veela-xx:
Lotsa boogying or however you spell it. :boogie: lol Thanks!

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The heart is the only broken organ that works...
:iconxx-trixie-veela-xx:
No, that's why they call it 'fiction.' lawl Thankies! *huggles*

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The heart is the only broken organ that works...
:iconrandombabe:
IT IS! XD CUZ I HAVE CRITICISM FOR EVERYTHING |D

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'Let me guess, you picked out yet another colorful box with a crank that I'm expected to turn and turn until OOP! big shock, a jack pops out and you laugh and the kids laugh and the dog laughs and I die a little inside.' ~ Stewie.
:iconemo-racoon:
When you mentioned her wings were replaced my demon horns, I think you should've put that the horns were replacing the halo. It makes more sense, since the halo is on her head, and so would the horns.

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Emoriffic.
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